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New Work: Mixed media, Found Objects, Music, Video
Author: estevan on April 07 2008
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The Sun: A video
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I like where "The Sun" starts going about two minutes in. I do enjoy the sunset footage, but I'm not sure it works against the track as strongly as it could. I wish I could give you more concrete suggestions or advice than that. Musicially, I do like where the track goes after about the two minute mark, but the heavy delay effect in the first two minutes falls flat to me.

Thanks for posting!

yeah i agree with hecanjog,

maybe some editing of speed and direction?

the sun: I like the track more than the video. But Im not sure they match. Well, not that they have to 'match', but they seem unstimulatingly (??) incongruous. The footage is beautiful though. The editing seemed arbitrary at times.
So I guess for me these are two good ingredients that don't necessarily work together.


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