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Author: unravelme1 on January 18 2007

--> I just made this, but don't really know where to go with it. Any suggestions?

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01/18/07 + mookid

It's already sounding good. like Sigur Ros meets Orbital. I'd cut it right down into a punchy drum line, may even a key-change. Eventually ending in an outro where it all started.

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01/18/07 + albatrocity

I like the sounds a lot. A little repetitive, but it sounds like a good start to something.

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01/18/07 + djjjimmy

cool ! very optimistic little melody . it's ready . don't need more than : take out some elements , filter in - out , repeat and fade out at the end . not every piece has to be more than 2 or 3 minutes
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01/18/07 + lunatinker

the picture is "the cute".
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i love it. also, i came up with a chorus for the whole thing. sounds like a brilliant part of a song.
no offense and like it hos it is.

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01/18/07 + lunatinker

what i meant was, where's the verse? i hear a great chorus part of the song. i know i should suggest something more useful. sorry. maybe i think about it some more!

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01/18/07 + GregTArtZ

very intresting..I like where you take this. It beccomes a bit too
soft-synth for my tastes but non the less, smooth track.

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01/19/07 + unravelme1

Thanks for the comments everyone. I think I'm going to take mookid's suggestion and work into a hot rhythmic part. I was originally going to do what djjjimmy recommended, but decided that this synth part is way too hot to waste on a somewhat disposable track.

01/20/07 + stringedthry

i dig this. very upbeat and, like the tag says, happy. i'd be interested to see where you go with it. i think a progression change would do the trick. i'd suggest bringing the instrumentation down a bit during the change and bringing in some pulsing or syncopated drums. then when the melody comes in again, it'll pop.

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