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Author: sAMsKi on January 25 2007
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well, this is my first release on here...cos I just realised what em411 is really all about.
i wrote this tune just over a year ago, mostly bedside, as my grandad was dying. he died a year ago yesterday. i have always liked this tune but have never known whether to share it - not least because it has a nasty sample of my grandad in it at the end.
i guess it's a good sign that i have decided to put it on here! hope you like it, or take something from it.
ooh, and don't hesitate to criticise it because of what i just outlined. i want mixing tips, mastering tips and whatnot from you lot please.
big ups, sam.
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01/25/07
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stringedthry
i'm sorry to hear about your grandfather. mine passed away late last year.
i tried to give this a go but it literally hurts my ears. control those highs. it's unlistenable as is.
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sAMsKi
thanks. death is very final isn't it.......
i guess i wasn't feeling too controlled at the time, sorry to hurt your ears. i take it you're not into merzbow then? 
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sAMsKi
oops. tried to edit above post and ended up with a copy. an echo. which i can't delete!???
-----------------------------------------------------------onwards........sorry.
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everamzah
nice and brutal. i enjoyed it on my laptop speakers (especially the drums)
edit: thoroughly enjoyed this. i dont know shit about mixing, personally, but im sure someone here will let u know - i thought the sample at the end really added. this song, as a whole, as music though, very nice and expressive methought
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monkvolcano
intense stuff..
where'd you get the strings from? they're nice.
the beat itself is spot on, and the modulations were applied well, although they sounded like the typical glitch vst bag o' tricks.. which are basically all from 'windowlicker'.. but still, very cool.
shit.. that sample at the end. damn.
well.. he's been released from this world, and he's one with the universe.. that's the only thing we can all look forward to for certain!
and btw, the part at the beginning is great.. it's kind of like his body malfunctioning or something... very foreboding.
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everamzah
i always click on titles like this cause i think someone's leaving the community LOL
edit: damn i love this song
01/25/07
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monkvolcano
yea.. i thought maybe this would be a midimacman song.. or something..
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lunatinker
i - yie ! high-pitched screeches! ...
also, my grandpa - i wrote a song for him too. my parents were silly and had it played at the funeral ....
this is beautiful. i'm sorry for your loss and like this piece of music a lot.
01/25/07
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dustmite
my condolences on your loss.
i really dig the tune. very dark and the drum programming is thoughtful and tight.
01/25/07
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doofgoblin
sorry for your loss.
the ending had me wrapt, and the high pitches are very nice indeed.
01/25/07
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sAMsKi
thanks for all the comments and condolences. much appreciated!
monkvolcano: you are correct in your thinking on the drums. a sampled beat, through glitch, resampled, chopped, effected and rebuilt. not a very romantic process and certainly a bit old hat the sting sample is a cropped, bent and effected nord sample sound, which i found online sometime and liked.
lunatinker: i made another (piano only) tune that was played at the funeral. i also did a speech/poem, was all a bit overwhelming 
i am glad i got around to airing this and i thank you again for your kind comments. where's PAWEL? hasn't he got something insensitive to say on the matter?? heheh.
ta.
01/25/07
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mlbot
The high pitched noise and the strings (processed or not) make for a very moody intro, a little painful too.
Then the drums come in, and they are all happy.
I think there needs to be some sort of transition, just having the drums jump in while the strings are going is a bit distriacting, imo.
Maybe have the strings drop out for awhile, as the drums fade in?
Or consider replacing the drums altogether? Make them less funky dancing robot drums and perhaps process them to be rhythmic, but not glitch-happy drum machiney?
Hearing the end of the track, well, all the other elements of this song fit together well, sound good, and are very emotional. My only gripe is the beats.
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sAMsKi
dig what you're saying mlbot. i struggle to leave drums out sometimes. dunno why. i like tunes that have no drums, or maybe some other rhythmical sounds like boxes being hit and stuff - but i often seem to put pretty straight drums in...*shrugs*
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mixedtape
dude. fucking awesome. i don't think you had to tell me anything and I would have thought this was just as powerful. though, hearing that sample at the end just evokes so many emotions. i'm sorry for your loss but, wow, did you do a tribute justice. thanks for sharing something so personal, that's what it's all about!
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mlbot
i know what you mean, leaving out drums IS hard.
But Its my opinion that for this piece of music, you gotta try.
If you have that rhythm as a midi file, transfer that track over to a sampler/drum sampler and start loading up found-sounds or sound effects instead of drum sounds?? Its not the fact that there's a rhythm that seems out of place to me, its the sounds.
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