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race4prize - somewhere in sweden
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well ive been working on this today. still think it needs a lot of work so just looking for any advice really... i know the bassline is pretty lame. it just feels like it needs something and i cant work out what....
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02/12/07
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mlbot
Its needs delay and a synth drone "bassline" imo
02/12/07
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race4prize
as in delay on the whole track or just the guitar bits?
edited: Feb 12 2007
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corpi
adcbicycle is that you?
love it until the guitar breakdown..
02/12/07
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race4prize
hey? no its not adcbicycle. you mean the chorus bit?
02/12/07
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Plissken
I loved this. Nice slow start, love the bird sounds, when the drums finally come in it's a great payoff.
Couple things tho: I would use a bit less of the vocal sample. Also, the static sample grated a little: maybe use less of it, or not at all, or maybe EQ it down a little?
Anyway, great shit.
02/12/07
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mlbot
bleh, no, dont delay the whole track. Try the guitar bits. Try a delay that creates a polythyhm, maybe?
Juts idears...
02/12/07
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clarkq
the sample talks about katarina kyrka! like two blocks away from me. nice track.
02/12/07
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tooth
No delay please or you might aswell get Paul Oakenfold to come in and finish it for you. The guitar's a bit harsh imo, could be lowpassed a bit or warmed up with a tape (?). Enjoyed it though, nice drums and the usual dreamy race vibe.
02/12/07
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race4prize
yeah i cant record guitars for shit in my studio. the worst room for it you have ever seen. plus my guitar is a piece of shit and im using a 57.  im gonna record it to tape but my recorder is bust at the moment
02/12/07
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adcBicycle
hey, my song!! where did you get it?!!
Like this a lot r4p. My small suggestion: expand
one, in the stereo field, pan some stuff out...
two, in the eq, add some different frequency sounds, maybe bassyness?
overall great track, catchy interesting simple.
02/12/07
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tunalicker
a little rough around the edge of the guitar. love the spoken . ... i'm a language moron. is this russian/ukranian?
bird sounds are "ok" but maybe a little city sounds, like traffic, or faint horns or something for a certain "feeling"?
As is, lovely. the idea/concept is awesome. nevermind my typing of feedbacks. its absent-minded a little (cuz i am)... =)
02/12/07
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Geddupnoise
woooooah. I love the background samples, wow. The drum break out during the spoken part confused me, i wanted the drum jubillee that had just happend before. But wow, those feildrecordings are amazing, they really add a sense of place and mood to teh track. That and the lofi, graty guitar sounds hella cool too.
Nice track :-D
02/13/07
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cbit
lovely. some strums sound a little brash but i'm listening on shitty spkers at the moment.. will check it again on headpwns.
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