07/13/07
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lunatinker
so, the pitch bends are coo. i like the composition.
the tune is kinda playful pop retro early 90s right?
if the rapture comes, can i have your car?
cool. the sun belongs to god? no gods. no masters.
oh. i was supposed to talk about the song.
07/14/07
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hardvoltnine
I liked the composition too, but i think the textures get boring after a while.
ps, its "praise god" and "god bless" but "bless god" seems backwards.
07/15/07
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energygiant
no i think he was blessing god and jesus
07/15/07
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dudymas
Dude! thanks a lot for the comments. Hah! energygiant got it right.
hardvoltnine: Thanks... anything in general you can pinpoint? Where do you think I should have gone? Should I have put more XXXXX or YYYYY into ZZZZZ? That sorta stuff... I mean, you don't have to spoon feed me, but I don't mind hearing suggestions of what you think would have better. I can't say your critique is credible unless you have a good idea of a better way of doing something... perhaps it would have been to just shorten the song and lengthen a different part... you know... let me know if you have any clever ideas or wot-not
07/18/07
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light3000
Sounds clean and unique. Great Job.