09/08/07
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LDog
Doesn't show to me though.
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09/10/07
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Jim
Some things that worked for me were the buzzing synth sound, the city noises, and the rhodes-like sound. The end really worked for me too, very bittersweet and pretty with those strings and all. When the song picks up a bit of the ways in I like it more, in the beginning, everything is too much on the beat, it feels very robotic. The drums contribute to this feeling as well for me, but I don't have suggestions on how to make them less rigid.
09/11/07
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LDog
Thanks for the comment! I personally like this mechanical feeling of drums, being them cr78 samples they have to be robotic ;) Piano chords could use a more human feel at the beginning i reckon.
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09/12/07
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Jim
Yeah, although I'm imagining a robot waking up or learning how to walk in the beginning, jerky and unsure.