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Author: alexander on September 17 2007
--> Something I've been working on for a while. Just now getting to a point where I need to strip things down and begin mixing, cleaning things up, etc. Any comments would be greatly appreciated.

The vocals are a work in progress...

bold suggestions like "You should ditch the second guitar part because it fucks up everything in the melody" are especially encouraged. I feel like I need to get rid of some stuff in this track.

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i can hear nothing

hrmm
me too

Working now... I had the filename in caps.

the drums sound strange to me, ((they seem to have no bottom end)) no i don't know exactly what is missing, they just sound strange
uiu ui ui you have a lot of work to do on this
you could make the vokals bigger, push them more in the foreground
you should ditch ALL guitar parts (kidding! )
(all above mentioned statements IMHO)

word. Thanks for the comments. I think I'll make a pass at the drums today...

the vocals are great! are those samples?
i like that tremolo'd guitar a lot...and the synth stuff
that 'main' guitar line doesnt interest me much..

i like the next song, and your website

yes.... vocals are samples of an acapella track....

michel'le "keep watching"

a little research reveals michel'le to be dr. dre's ex-girlfriend. who'da thunk?

Michel'le on discogs

i like the grittiness and happy feeling mixture.

this reminds me a bit of ratatat....the tight guitars and big beats
im not sure how you take that but its meant as a great compliment

and its taken as one! Ratat is the shizzit. I was listening to the ratatat remix mixtapes a lot when I started working on this...


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