11/20/07
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tantan
Wait, the song you're covering was live, or you performed this live?
Nice work on this, keep at it. Your pitch is decent enough not to need to hide your vocals behind so much reverb--bring it up, don't be shy, let your voice hang out there all naked and vulnerable. The song is pretty and interesting enough to support you.
The kick drum sort of detracts for me, not sure why. It seems so sporadic, and doesn't add much. If you want to give it some sort of percussion, I'd suggest something slow and deliberate, but maybe a bit washed out so that it doesn't dominate.
11/20/07
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tunalicker
Dreamy. the rush or overtone of static is something I would add a little more "warmth" or LFO to for rythmic or pleasing effect. Other than trivial whiny comments, I love your song. No complaints. Happy to have heard it!
11/20/07
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jack123
the kick drum doesn't fit at all. Get rid of the electro kick and stick to a sub bass. Your voice is very nice.
11/21/07
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timmo
Hey folks,
Thanks for the comments! I will work on the drums, which is something I'm just not good at, and warm it all up a bit.
Thanks again!
11/21/07
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j_chot
I liked this:
too damn short.
11/21/07
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celibacyclub
wow
timmo you done something wonderful.
singing is really nice.
11/22/07
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reehc
this is great!, does need to be longer i think
