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Author: estevan on December 17 2007
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oh fello tom c clark peer . . . woah, this totally doesn't sound like you though. are those your vocals? you sound extremely emo . . . you could loosen up the snare a bit . . . maybe find a softer snare to work in as to alleviate the abrasiveness of the loud one?

I like the overall idea of the song...the vocals work well with the mood/attitude of the track. but yeah...the constant snare seriously gets on my nerves.

lighten up the snare maybe?

edit: p.s. do you still hate me for my family being rich and white ?

hate you for your family being rich and white? i don't remember your family or anything like that. did i meet them? i have no idea if you're rich? i mean, i still only loosely remember you. in principle my concerns towards towards whites and the privileged class is as objective as it can be. there's no hate. there's a number of white folk in my family. only the occasional self-destructive resentment is what i feel at times but rather it's a matter of cultural, socio-economic, misunderstanding. i also hate the combination of republican, white, upper-middle class, ignorance. i hate certain close-mindedness. if it were as simple as hating whites and rich people, that would be insane. what the hell are you talking about?

and yeah, that snare is crazy. i just did this track in a few hours. i don't listen to emo so i can't comment on that. i'm am not a vocalist.

Here's some changes:

just experimenting with the chorus, that snare, some variations, and some kind of synth solo

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haha...well, i just remember you giving me shit because i got an er-1 and an1x in high school...and you're reasoning behind it was because i was a spoiled white boy. then again, you did buy me that cheesy pipe from central park mall before it got terminated.


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