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Shield My Bright Eyes
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Author: Spark on April 29 2008
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no. we all know em'ers can't spell. (shield).
The pumping beat and happy noises is confusing. like two different songs?
I love the creativity and melodies in the insturmentation )(arpeggios and tune)(
later the song really feels more together and fits. the first part was too much sounds at once maybe.

I really like this! It's compositionally lovely. The big beat and appealing synth melodies are a fine pair to my ears. Some of the sounds, particularly the bass and bass kick, have a muffled sound to them. This may or may not have been intentional. Regardless, it gives the song an old tape feel to it. That kind of intrigues me. I'd like to hear a more clarified version of the mix to compare this to, but maybe this version would still be more appealing. Lastly, I would love to hear you extend this song. Push yourself to keep composing it for an addition three or more minutes. It would be really challenging to keep it interesting, but success would be so rewarding for you and all listeners.

I was kinda going for that sappy, sticky disco beat.
The too many sounds is on purpose.. Like you walk out onto a busy street kinda thing.
A big mutha subwoofer helps this one along quite nicely too.

I'll thin out the mix and see how it feels.
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I like this alot, this track has a drexciyan feel to it which is good in my books.

I agree with nick that this tune should be extended.

Thanks for the share!


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