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Author: splm on May 26 2009
--> this is a totally unfinished track by my band AmericanMen. laser rock.

i'm always a bit stuck on production stuff so any criticism/hints would be most welcome.
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05/26/09 +  FailedSitcom
It sounds really cool to me, the part before the arpegiated outro is particularly nice.

A lot of the sounds seem to have a fair amount of decay on them though (cymbal splashes and the synth parts particularly), and it might be nice to have a section with a more staccato feel perhaps?

Nice work.
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05/26/09 +  splm
thanks - that's a good point about the decay. it does contribute to quite a messy feel (which wasn't on purpose).

05/26/09 +  monty
good stuff.

it could do with some vocals, or a solo or something.
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06/01/09 +  zfigz
Oh my, some smooth jivin' jamz. nice werk
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