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Sleep Facing West
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Author: Tripnik on August 28 2006
--> I've had no ideas for anything whatsoever for a looooooong time, but recently promised a friend I'd write a track for her. As a result, this is like the first thing I've written in months. Apologies for the predictability, but I'm on empty.
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[fixed the problem with the pic]

wasn't particularly predictable.

loved the harmonies in this, especially in the second to last part.

yes make more stuff. your friend was right to force you.

i didn't find it predictable, but i did find it awesome!

Now fix the problem with your mind. This is very good you fool.

sounds good man, write more stuff.

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awesome. I really like this track a lot. The only thing I would say for constructive criticism is...I felt that the last crescendo could have kept getting bigger. The first crescendo fit very nicely where it was, but when you get to the second one, right before the peice ends, it arrives at the same intensity level as the first. I think it would be a little more effective if you continued past that, maybe layered another guitar track, added a synth or just generally made the sound a little thicker.

Great job breaking away from that dry spell!!!

good acoustic sound, Lyrics would work over this. Cool track.
Great track, I really like the soft claps and tone of the guitar. Interesting beats as well, they work really well with the vocal chops.
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Wonderful track, bud! The guitars are lovely lovely lovely, and the beat's rocking. You're absolutely silly for tagging this "crappy"!
d(^_^)b <= That's a two-thumbs-up for you... cheer up!

mmmm houstonians.
nice hearing you

Great track, really like this.

you have a particularly good and original sound. the song pokes emotions.

don't fade it out at the end.

great tune! the chops are perfect - excellent contrast to the other acoustic vibes

i love this!
nothing to add really....except i agree that some vocals would work really well.
and stop being lazy and make more music ;)

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