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zfigz/grassnose - Day Dream
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Author: zfigz on October 11 2006
--> I've been taking piano lessons for a lil' bit now and I asked my teach if he could give me compositional guidelines to make tracks every week. Well, this is my first effort. He wanted 1/8 and 1/2 notes in Aminor. Here it is...

I used Zebra 2 and Guru in Live 6...

p.s. critique please...i need as much as i can get...
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Comments

nice. i wish for teh zebra and the dog picture? priceless. lovely day dream. . .
the bassline is lovely, contrasting the intro percussion elements.
the kick-in of the primary beats didn't really do it for me.
the melodies are happy, sloppy in a good way, and goofy-great!
i keep lookin' at that dog and thinking "whuhh?! riydo-no schooby..!"
lol grea stuff. i had to stay in the wheelchair until i left the building...er...song!

Ok Ok Ok ! ! ! I re-did the drums, but I want you guys to decide which you like better...

Links are 1) Breakbeat drums link
2) Weird lil' drums link

Help me decide...

Subtle enough to be interesting.

i liked the breaky beats better.

i think this song is very cool. i actually liked the drums in particular. the textures are very nice.

i liked the weird beats one better

nice composition, too. not sitting near an instrument to know how close to a minor it is, but cool

yeah, after lunatinker mentioned that the breakbeat didn't do it for him I decided to rethink the drums...

oh ok its here, i listened to the track in my gmail ... listening to the whole thing now.

yeah, I think the weirder beats contrast with the other parts better.

i love them both..! ...

%)         (happy but so-sorry-i'm-cross-eyed face)

i'm sorry . .. . i didn't mean anything bad by it.


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